[AFTER David E. Patton/ The Jazz Symphonic Glass Ear (page 47-55) and ....pic]
non-miraculous eyes
it was a time when the criminal exaggerated in his improvisation
and of course the analog brain was entirely responsible for that
he felt the slippery society haunted the holy common singing in the stronghold of the contemplating head
damn
and then St. Guilty passing along the row of tongues happy and exhilarating like a sunny extreme
an evening cigarette and then
the whole winter-mating all to ourselves…..
even the long countermelodies of combatant Gods were made up of inside necessity sounds
at the time
their weary behavior was reflected by windows that aborted distances
while Possibility again was drowning the odor of places
encharmed
embracing the roots that reached for the cradle of wisdom
upside downish
history/histories
a weary habitat pixilating
ending euphorically behind its black-legged limits
(thanks, david)
11 comments:
I lived for many years in Denver and was out ther last Step. to read in Evergreen at the Art Center hosted by Padma Thronlye and the Laughting Goat in Boulder hosted by Tom Peters. I noticed that the color of the drawing was off you may want to try Picasa its from google and its free
Other sites of mine that you may like to check out
www.graphicandwords.blogspot.com/
www.spiritualityandpoetry.blogspot.com/
http://www.blackgaypoetry.blogspot.com/
your writing have caught me up there is something cold about it that catches the imagaination and leave you wanting more
thank you, david
oh,yes....denver is perfect...i feel at home here...a beautiful place and...mountains , above all things !! above us all...
i managed to change the color of your pic , too...on purpose...and it suddenly displayed those little -almost human- paws all over the image...
actually i am interested what pics hide under their surfaces...
yes, still picasa is a good idea...lol
interesting, david...mucho interesting...thanks a lot...i'll check them up at once...altho i move slowly...
yes, cold...that's because i use other people's words, not mine...lol
@ow! I'm impressed. David E. Patton posted here.
I like what you did, its very colorful.
thanks, LL...i appreciate your words...but i'm sure you refer to the pic...as being colorful...
david told me that the story is cold.....hu hu hu hu hu
(and it certainly is...lol)
I do refer to the pic as being colorful. Is David E. Patton a famous artist?
"Part Langston Hughes bebop, part Beat freestyle, part Midwestern folk banter, the work of David E. Patton spans generations & weaves together a wealth of styles to create a unique & deeply personal vein of Americana. A gay, largely self-educated black man who came of age during the turbulence of the Sixties and Seventies, his voice reverberates with a humble confidence & lonesome strength which at once saddens & transfixes. Largely uninfluenced by recent movements, Patton’s material remains simple, insightful, & ultimately some of the most genuine to exist in modern poetry.
He posts frequently at Uncle David, his blog of poetry and poetics."
yes, i think he is...
and i also think his eyes are green, LL....
to prove it , look at the pic i post right now...
David has green eyes?
well, LL, sort of...
i made him a pair of green eyes...
i hope he won't mind...he he
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