June 01, 2007

to anne boyer : on things




people get diaristic, my dear


not-things acquisition.....so protective : blogs without floor) *

and you making poems THINGS: bodies mark dreadful writing

about rearranged (words), then SUBSECTIONS


always provoking medium flesh upheaval,

or public distribution, or rawly used boxes


unlike this book, bearing commerce in its made language) somehow floor). *

somehow envelope


I rearrange

the penetrable book - a demonstration box -

desire box

as TOY...


protective writing


* I - making poems THINGS:


* I - SUBSECTION


I - about boxes


4 comments:

Anonymous said...

carmen,

awesome poem!

'rearrange the penetrable book' -- that's a way cool way of stating intentions of experimental poetry, some of it

10, sum of it

nice work!

/t.

carmen racovitza said...

wow, thanks, /t...i cherished your opinion...
and i like the word awesome...when it refers to poems...wow wow wow

Little Lamb said...

Lock and key

carmen racovitza said...

yes, LL, even a simple box must be kept under lock and key...:))