people get diaristic, my dear
not-things acquisition.....so protective : blogs without floor) *
and you making poems THINGS: bodies mark dreadful writing
about rearranged (words), then SUBSECTIONS
always provoking medium flesh upheaval,
or public distribution, or rawly used boxes
unlike this book, bearing commerce in its made language) somehow floor). *
somehow envelope
I rearrange
the penetrable book - a demonstration box -
desire box
as TOY...
protective writing
* I - making poems THINGS:
* I - SUBSECTION
I - about boxes
4 comments:
carmen,
awesome poem!
'rearrange the penetrable book' -- that's a way cool way of stating intentions of experimental poetry, some of it
10, sum of it
nice work!
/t.
wow, thanks, /t...i cherished your opinion...
and i like the word awesome...when it refers to poems...wow wow wow
Lock and key
yes, LL, even a simple box must be kept under lock and key...:))
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